Post by Jedi Master Legos on Dec 3, 2005 18:49:05 GMT -5
Tell me what you think this is the story that introduce Shinzo to Jacks.
"So Jacks are you ready to die.” In this moment I look back and wonder how I am looking down at the monster name Shinzo that is planning to kill me.
It started went we got a distress call from a planet that was under attack. So we decided to help them out, who would have known that was the last time we would see earth again. When we got there the planet wasn't under attack, we talk to the indigenous life and just to find out nothing was wrong. This was a deception to lure us away from Earth. Then Shinzo send a message to us that tells us earth will be destroyed in 5 minutes. Our ship would not make it in time.
In rage, my body started heating up and glowing a red flame. I then exit the ship at a speed like no other person can imagine to save my planet. To other people I would look like a shooting star in space. When I got there I was able to see earth explode in to a million pieces and the monster name Shinzo that did it with and evil grin. Went I say monster he was a normal man just with superhuman abilities and just like me I could tell he was powerful.
But in this case I wasn't thinking straight, I was filled with rage that earth was destroyed. Shinzo says "Just so you will know who is going to kill you my name is Shinzo." I started to fight but before I hit him he transport us to a different dimension, he says in and evil voice, “Its over Jacks this is my dimension where I rule, so prepared to die. You will feel the deaths of all the people from Earth and your pain a million times stronger in this dimension and it will consume you. Because its all your fault.” He was right I should have been there.
In this moment the pain I felt was so horrible I would not wish it on any one. But he just stand there smiling. “See Jacks carring for others is weak and I will show you”. Then he started fighting me but I wouldn’t say fighting he was beating me up, I was in to much pain I couldn't fight back. He kicks me and an hitting me with a blast of energy. Then he said “Jacks lets see if you like this better my pain will become like weights on you in till it crushs you. This is the luxury of this dimension.” Then he makes a chair out of shadows, stops to sit and watch.
Then said Shinzo “So Jacks are you ready to die.” The pain was geting to be unbearable, my pain was becoming like weights like he said, it was like a big anvil was on my back. It felt like a million tons and I knew this was the end. As I thought it was the end a celestial beam that look like an angel, Shinzo couldn’t see her, she started talking to me in a heavenly voice. “You did everything you could have done, why do you blame yourself.” I said “I wasn't strong enough”. She said “You are strong enough, you have an untap power, you have the power of the ones you care for. Don’t worry about the ones who die , there are well taken care of.” As soon as she said that my mind got faint images of the people from earth cheering me on, then the weight started to get lighter in till I was able to stand up.
Shinzo said “Why are you able to do that, stop it this instant. This is my dimension I rule and you cant do that” Then he started to charge, but it was to later the new power was unlock, my eye started to glow red and a flame surround me and Shinzo stop charging at me. I said aloud “My element is fire this power was given to me to protect people from the likes of you, SO BURN BRIGHTER." Jacks glows brighter and said "Because of the terrible things you have done its time to pay.” I put my hands next to each other, in the middle a little red growing ball starts to form and gets bigger. Then I said “This is the end, FINAL ASSAULT.” Then a big beam goes towards Shinzo. Shinzo says “No this is my dimension, I rule over it, no one beats me here, this is not possible ahhhhhhhhhhh” The beam consumes him, after that there was nothing left of him.
His dimension started to fade back to my dimension. I was standing where earth was, still fill with anger I fly off.
Jacks' pain, Shinzo's end
"So Jacks are you ready to die.” In this moment I look back and wonder how I am looking down at the monster name Shinzo that is planning to kill me.
It started went we got a distress call from a planet that was under attack. So we decided to help them out, who would have known that was the last time we would see earth again. When we got there the planet wasn't under attack, we talk to the indigenous life and just to find out nothing was wrong. This was a deception to lure us away from Earth. Then Shinzo send a message to us that tells us earth will be destroyed in 5 minutes. Our ship would not make it in time.
In rage, my body started heating up and glowing a red flame. I then exit the ship at a speed like no other person can imagine to save my planet. To other people I would look like a shooting star in space. When I got there I was able to see earth explode in to a million pieces and the monster name Shinzo that did it with and evil grin. Went I say monster he was a normal man just with superhuman abilities and just like me I could tell he was powerful.
But in this case I wasn't thinking straight, I was filled with rage that earth was destroyed. Shinzo says "Just so you will know who is going to kill you my name is Shinzo." I started to fight but before I hit him he transport us to a different dimension, he says in and evil voice, “Its over Jacks this is my dimension where I rule, so prepared to die. You will feel the deaths of all the people from Earth and your pain a million times stronger in this dimension and it will consume you. Because its all your fault.” He was right I should have been there.
In this moment the pain I felt was so horrible I would not wish it on any one. But he just stand there smiling. “See Jacks carring for others is weak and I will show you”. Then he started fighting me but I wouldn’t say fighting he was beating me up, I was in to much pain I couldn't fight back. He kicks me and an hitting me with a blast of energy. Then he said “Jacks lets see if you like this better my pain will become like weights on you in till it crushs you. This is the luxury of this dimension.” Then he makes a chair out of shadows, stops to sit and watch.
Then said Shinzo “So Jacks are you ready to die.” The pain was geting to be unbearable, my pain was becoming like weights like he said, it was like a big anvil was on my back. It felt like a million tons and I knew this was the end. As I thought it was the end a celestial beam that look like an angel, Shinzo couldn’t see her, she started talking to me in a heavenly voice. “You did everything you could have done, why do you blame yourself.” I said “I wasn't strong enough”. She said “You are strong enough, you have an untap power, you have the power of the ones you care for. Don’t worry about the ones who die , there are well taken care of.” As soon as she said that my mind got faint images of the people from earth cheering me on, then the weight started to get lighter in till I was able to stand up.
Shinzo said “Why are you able to do that, stop it this instant. This is my dimension I rule and you cant do that” Then he started to charge, but it was to later the new power was unlock, my eye started to glow red and a flame surround me and Shinzo stop charging at me. I said aloud “My element is fire this power was given to me to protect people from the likes of you, SO BURN BRIGHTER." Jacks glows brighter and said "Because of the terrible things you have done its time to pay.” I put my hands next to each other, in the middle a little red growing ball starts to form and gets bigger. Then I said “This is the end, FINAL ASSAULT.” Then a big beam goes towards Shinzo. Shinzo says “No this is my dimension, I rule over it, no one beats me here, this is not possible ahhhhhhhhhhh” The beam consumes him, after that there was nothing left of him.
His dimension started to fade back to my dimension. I was standing where earth was, still fill with anger I fly off.
